Agree with Charles, the beginning is very clear but you have lost track on the establishment of his urge to eat and his date afterwards. Starting from No 4 the whole idea is not clear, audience won't know what he wants and what happens at the end. Where is the drama?
我喜歡第一張和第二張，交代得很清楚！
回覆刪除後面太深奧了是吧?XD
回覆刪除晚上的lighting很有感覺
回覆刪除從第三張開始就有點深奧了……
回覆刪除作者已經移除這則留言。
刪除哈哈哈哈，不想要太簡單易懂嘛~
刪除想要觀眾像看影片一樣猜發生什麼事了。
Agree with Charles, the beginning is very clear but you have lost track on the establishment of his urge to eat and his date afterwards. Starting from No 4 the whole idea is not clear, audience won't know what he wants and what happens at the end. Where is the drama?
回覆刪除Please RE-DO it!!!!